My tzotzomatli, along with the pants beneath it are no longer purple or blue. They are brown, as brown as my skin. If anything, the mud has lightened Neca’s complexion. Steadying each other, we creep uphill toward the crest above the mouth of the cave.
This is where Centavo’s plan gets foggy. “Won’t we be visible to the immortals? I mean, please tell me we aren’t planning on walking up to the shield dome and knocking until someone lets us in.”
“Not exactly, but I don’t think you need to worry about anyone seeing us.”
Not understanding how that could be possible, I decide to display an effort at trust. Besides, I’m shivering with anticipation. Six years ago my brother and I caught a glimpse of the immortal side of New Teo from the farmland kilometers below. Never have I or anyone I know been this close. Except for Neca. We stop shy of the crest. “All right, lead the way.” I do my best to sound nonchalant.
“Let’s do it together.” Before I can object, he tugs me up and over.
I freeze in wonder. Just as quickly, wonder turns to confusion and disbelief. “That’s Immortal City? But it—”
“Looks pretty much the same. Yeah, that was my first thought too.”
“I don’t understand.”
“Hey, it’s just the other side of the coin. One side’s always gotta be tails.”
I gape, staring back and forth between Neca and the underwhelming Immortal City. “I have no idea what you’re talking about.”
“Never mind. Besides, don’t freak out completely. The dome is the dome, right?”
Slowly, I nod my head. Of course Immortal City would look the same from this perspective.
“On the inside it’s…different, sorta.”
“Now you’re confusing me for fun.”
He jogs fluidly toward the shield dome. “Well, yeah. Sorta.” Just like that, Neca returns to his exasperating self.
“Stop it already.” Still, it’s a struggle to look at something other than his backside as he strides up the gentle slope ahead of me. Luckily, the closer we get to the metal mesh of the shield dome the more detail I have to distract myself. Most of the buildings appear to be metal foam rather than adobe. No surprise there. The structures are taller on average but not as grand as I had imagined.
Ever since I can remember, I’ve dreamt of Immortal City: the buildings, the streets, the shops. Especially the shops. Yet with each step closer, I can’t escape the fact Immortal City looks like a cleaner, nicer version of the working-class half of New Teo. I know I shouldn’t be disappointed, but I am. After all, why should the immortals be treated so differently from the rest of us?
By the time we reach the shield, I’ve yet to see anything moving on the other side. No cable chairs, no shuttles, no people. “Now what?” I try to disguise that I’m out of breath and my side aches from eating nothing except fruit.
“We knock.”
“Wait, I thought—”
“Shhh,” he holds his finger to my lips and winks.
Somehow I’ve let on that his winking infuriates me. Now he’s doing it to excess. I’m about to see if I can land another punch, this one duly deserved, when he embraces me.
He’s so hot to the touch, his hand on my back must be burning through my clothes. My spine begins to vibrate. I struggle to draw a complete breath, to resist him. Instead, I melt. Then, to my shock, I realize we’re both melting right through the shield wall. The space of a few meters shimmers with telekinesis like butterflies swarming the branches of an Oyamel.
The surface ripples as we pass through it. Everything hums. I close my eyes as the light and heat washes up my chest and across my face. I gulp down air, my lungs expanding into a new-found freedom. Limp, I’m forced to cling to Neca. With a final shiver, I open my eyes. The impossible has happened; I’m inside Immortal City.
END of EPISODE ONE
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